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CopybetterideasthanmineWriter's avatar

Like the final tie-it-together line, but hate the jump from a not finished chip to a new chip. Script Girl or editing fail. Ruins it for me. And need tighter copy to tie scorching convo and scorching chips. Another fail. "Good" only in casting.

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Copyranter's avatar

Might not be an editing fail, might be stupid client insisting on two "full" product shots. I'm fine with the copy, especially these days.

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CopybetterideasthanmineWriter's avatar

I'd love to be on a shoot and hear that. I might check out and start a beautiful angry blog.

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Copyranter's avatar

I've been around some astoundingly stupid clients over the years.

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CopybetterideasthanmineWriter's avatar

Hey, how are the Rangers looking this year? As a Raleigh native, I'm happy to see Brind' Amour's work ethic paying dividends.

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Copyranter's avatar

Not a Rangers fan (well I don't hate them), Habs fan (check my about page for a photo). So, I of course do not want to discuss hockey further until the 2022 draft.

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CopybetterideasthanmineWriter's avatar

I can(not) imagine. "See bos, I made 'em show another full chip. Gotta keep the product front and center, right Big Guy?!"

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Wow, just wow.

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